Friday, July 11, 2014

Sinful act

Do you repent ? a harsh and husky voice asked the question.

Do you repent your deeds ? the voice asked again. This time the young man whose body was full of cuts and bruises looked towards his tormentor. His eyes was full of question.

Badgered with the assault and questions. He finally gathered courage to say something to his tormentor. "What have I done ? What's my mistake ?" The tormentor's voice got even louder, "you sinful soul, you don't know what you have done. You deserve all this suffering." With a long rod he again started beating the young man.

After few moments,he again repeated the same question " Do you repent ?" The young man started shivering with pain. There was blood coming out from every part of his body. He was badly hurt. In that pain he looked at his tormentor and said "I love that girl father and I want to marry her, I can't change how I feel.Kill me if you want." The young man felt unconscious after uttering these words.


To be continued...

16 comments:

  1. interesting build-up Gaurab...waiting for what happens next

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  2. This is a nice way to get the readers hooked up!

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  3. Wow... I really want to know what happens next..

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  4. that was an interesting story... would be waiting for what happens next.

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  5. Good one :)
    You have taken up a good issue. Waiting for what happens next.

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  6. Looking forward to read the next part...quite an interesting start. :)

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  7. gr8 ! waiting for next read :-)

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  8. Good read...eagerly waiting for next ...

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  9. Eager to know ............. what will happen next :)

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  10. Happens ..harsh truth..marrying or loving a girl/boy who is not of your religion can result even in honour (?)-killing....nice build-up Gaurab... waiting for the next part..

    Rizwanur-Priyanka Todi case er kawtha jaano ? West-Bengal er ghoTona...erokom-i hoyechhilo... :-(

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  11. Keep him alive and united with his love :)... don't separate them :(

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  12. Nice.. The story lurks at an interesting cliff hanger.. Waiting for the next part soon :)

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  13. Wonderfully written, The plot is unraveled wonderfully, not waiting for the next half because I feel this part completes itself. :)

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  14. That sounded so sad and painful! I wonder how parents can be so ruthless...if they don't understand their kids, who will? Waiting for the next part...good one :)

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  15. At first, I thought your story was about Hell! Then, after reading the whole story, I realized it's about Hell on Earth...

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    1. That's the best way to summarize the post. :) "Hell on Earth"

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